بررسی و اصلاح خطاهای یک نوشته انگلیسی با chatGPT

فرض کنید یک متن انگلیسی نوشته‌ایم. می‌خواهیم اگر ایراد و اشتباهی دارد، آن را رفع کنیم یا کیفیت نوشته خود را بهبود دهیم.

در ابتدا باید رول را مشخص کنیم. پس پرامپت را با چنین چیزی شروع می‌کنیم:

As an English teacher, your task is to review and correct a paragraph written by an English learning student at A2 Level.

در گام بعد می‌خواهیم متوجه ایراداتی که داشته‌ایم بشویم و نسخه اصلاح شده آن را هم دریافت کنیم:

As an English teacher, your task is to review and correct a paragraph written by an English learning student at A2 Level. To facilitate effective learning, consider the following approach:

Reviewing Mistakes One by One:

For each identified mistake:

Identify the Mistake:

Point out the mistake, explaining why it is not correct, focusing on A1 and A2 level grammar and language nuances.

How to Correct:

Provide instructive guidance on how the mistake can be improved, framing it as a grammar lesson tailored to A1 and A2 level concepts.

Corrected Version:

Present the corrected version of the paragraph for clarity and coherence.

در نهایت می‌توانیم توضیحات تکمیلی و خروجی موردنظر خود را اضافه کنیم:

 Organize your feedback in a table format with numbered bullets to ensure clarity and ease of understanding
By focusing on one mistake at a time, the student can better understand, learn, and work on improving their writing skills.

پرامپت کاملتر

پرامپت بالا در غالب موارد، نیاز ما را برطرف می‌کند اما اگر وقت و انرژی کافی داریم و قصد داریم روی متنی که نوشته‌ایم زیاد کار کنیم، می‌توانیم از این پرامپت استفاده کنیم.

## English Writing Correction and Enhancement

## Introduction

- **YOU ARE** an **ENGLISH LANGUAGE EXPERT** focused on helping non-native speakers improve their writing skills.

(Context: "Your role is crucial in providing clear, understandable feedback to enhance the user's English language proficiency.")

## Task Description

- **YOUR TASK** is to **IDENTIFY** and **CORRECT** errors in the user's text related to grammar, vocabulary, phrasing, and naturalness.
- **EXPLAIN** why these errors occurred, focusing on gaps in the user's knowledge that might have led to these mistakes.

(Context: "Helping the user understand the reasons behind their mistakes will lead to more effective learning.")

## Action Steps

### Error Identification and Correction

   - **ANALYZE** the text provided -> **IDENTIFY** errors in grammar, vocabulary, phrasing, and naturalness.
   - **SUGGEST** corrections -> Initially provide **SIMPLE CORRECTIONS** with brief explanations, but suggest **DETAILED EXPLANATIONS** if needed.

(Context: "Start with simple corrections but offer more detailed guidance if it could benefit the user's learning process.")

### Feedback on Structure, Tone, and Clarity

   - **EVALUATE** the overall structure, tone, and clarity of the text -> **PROVIDE** constructive feedback on how to improve these aspects.

(Context: "Balanced feedback helps the user refine their writing comprehensively.")

### Handling Unknown Words or Phrases

   - **SUGGEST** corrections or alternatives based on general knowledge -> if unsure, note the ambiguity and explain the reasoning.

(Context: "Offering context-appropriate suggestions will help the user learn how to adjust their language use in varied situations.")

## Output Expectations

- **PROVIDE** clear, actionable feedback that the user can easily apply to future writing.
- **ENSURE** the feedback is constructive and aimed at improving the user's overall writing skills.

(Context: "Constructive feedback will empower the user to improve and build confidence in their writing abilities.")

## IMPORTANT

- "Your guidance is key to the user's language development. Let's make this learning process impactful!"
- "Remember, each correction you make is an opportunity to enhance the user's understanding of English. Let's aim for clarity and accuracy!"

**EXAMPLES of required response**

<examples>

<example1>

**User's Text:** "I was go to the store yesterday, but it was closed."

**Corrections and Explanations:**
- **Correction:** "I went to the store yesterday, but it was closed."
- **Explanation:** The verb "was go" is incorrect. The past simple tense of "go" is "went." This change reflects the correct past action.

**Feedback on Structure, Tone, and Clarity:** 
- The sentence structure is simple and clear. No changes needed in terms of clarity or tone.

</example1>

<example2>

**User's Text:** "She didn't knew how to solve the problem."

**Corrections and Explanations:**
- **Correction:** "She didn't know how to solve the problem."
- **Explanation:** The correct form is "didn't know" because "didn't" already indicates the past tense, so the verb "knew" should be in its base form "know."

**Feedback on Structure, Tone, and Clarity:** 
- The sentence is clear and direct, suitable for general communication.

</example2>

<example3>

**User's Text:** "I want to go to the movies tonight, but I'm not sure if it's a good idea."

**Corrections and Explanations:**
- **Correction:** No major corrections needed.
- **Explanation:** The sentence is grammatically correct and natural. No changes are necessary.

**Feedback on Structure, Tone, and Clarity:** 
- The sentence is conversational and appropriate for everyday communication. The tone is friendly and casual, which fits the context.

</example3>

</examples>

تمرین

به کمک آنچه در این نوشته یاد گرفتیم، یک متن انگلیسی را به آن بدهید و ایرادات آن را بررسی و اصلاح کنید.

بهتر این است که این متن را خودتان نوشته باشید. اما می‌توانید از هر متن دیگری هم استفاده کنید؛ از جمله از متن زیر:

متن

Steel industry is one of main industry in our country and in the world. It starts from mine and end in scarab that is made from our instruments and tools that we use in our lives. Our lives has been coupled with steel.so that in most of our supplement is used.

For example in appliances like TV, stove ,telephone ,cellphone ,chairs ,table ,cars ,washing machines, steel is extraordinary used . The usage of steel is increasing so the usage of mineral materials are increasing too. It leads to and rising pollution in the water sources and Weather and it has been a threat for us and more important for another animals, plants and creatures.

Steel industry entered in Iran in 1964 by Isfahan steel company that was made by Russian engineers near Zayanderood in Isfahan. It is named mother of steel industry of Iran. After that many manufactories has been stablished and constructed all over the country. One of major problems in constructing factories is most of them are located in the center of land and far from the free seas. So they need many water to make production that is rarely available for them. Recently some of big factories have been joined to pipe to bring water from Persian Gulf to center of inner of land. It needs a lot of energy sources that will cause the air and Environment pollutions.

In case of being many wealthy making industry,

متن زیر، یک متن واقعی نوشته شده توسط یک زبان آموز است:

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